This is WONDERFUL! I love how each characters' expressions are, and I like how it deeply shows how they feel and how you could easily see their personality. The expressions are soo well drawn that it almost looks human-like and I love it. The shading and coloring is just outrageous. In addition, the story is glorious, I like how you make some of the events feel so exiting just like a movie. Not trying to rush you,sometimes I get a little impatient but i do also understand the school work your gong through and i'm looking forward into your future pages. Because of this, every other Fridays are may most favorite days.
I don't think there is any negative things about this comic so far that you need to change because like I said, this is Wonderful. Even though I wrote this at November 2nd, i'll give you a late HAPPY HALLOWEEN! :3